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can you put tele1 1 block down? when you spawn but immediately want to jump to the first part you waste dj in air
you need to add sv_solo_server 1 in server_settings so the map is a solo map
i sort of wish the there was more space where blue is, so you can use grenade at red to land there safely. right now you have to do 4 edges which is too much imo
tele2 needs unfreeze
try to close diagonals of teleport because you can actually go through these and land on the platform below. it's not really useful for skips down there i think, but still worth fixing in my opinion.
also use red tele instead of blue as you did at the start
please move this whole section 4-5 blocks to the left, because right now the two shotguns are not intuitive and you tend to either hit the ceiling of 2nd shotgun or land in freeze when you try to the part first time
tele3 needs unfreeze
the upper kill tiles are annoying, because you want to use dj to quickly to this part and than you fail because you land in here. if it's inteneded it's a troll but bad for speedrun
these are some of the little flaws, but overall the map will probably not be good enough to be released. the parts are not creative and don't flow into each other well. so here's my suggestion: make a new map and test that map thoroughly so you can direclty indentify unflowy parts like the cramped shotgun part. learn from the suggestions here, like adding unfreezes to teleport. Try took at recent solo / race map releases and play them to see what's expected.
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missing block
missing TP, and freeze...
Agree with ReD
$decline
Thanks for attending, it was my first map and I understand that it does not meet expectations, I will try to do better next time 3